Teen Talk

November/December 2005

Special Issue: Teen Writing Contest Winners!!!

Poetry
1st Place

A Black Heart
by Shannon Madgey, 14

A black heart
is cold
No matter how hard you search
it's empty
It's smothered in depression and anger
and it drips with sadness
A black heart is EVIL
It swells up inside you
until you burst
The blood it pumps is never red
but a glossy shade of black
A black heart kills the happiness
leaving you dreadful
and shivering
A black heart eats you inside
Till nothing is left
A black heart….

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Short Story
1st Place

Jason's Story
by Lacy Dohner, 13

Once upon a time I loved a horse. Not that uncommon, right? Plenty of teenage girls love horses. But I really loved this horse. And I mean really loved him. He was a buckskin; a small, stocky one, with a beautiful build and a sweet, unique personality. I dreamed about him every night. And not just every night. All day, too. He lived at a horseback riding ranch where I worked, and every chance I could I spent time with this horse. His name was Hawk. Not that I called him that. I just called him "my horse." In my mind, he was mine. He was all I thought about. He was all I talked about. He was the most important thing in my life.

I'd never ridden Hawk. Only one person rode him: Jason. Jason was one of the hands at the ranch. If it was any one else riding Hawk, I think I might have hated them. It was kind of hard to hate Jason.

Let me explain. Jason was a tall, skinny guy about twenty-five, with laughing blue eyes, crew cut blonde hair and a goofy grim that you couldn't help but giggle at. He'd do crazy things just for the fun of it. One day I found him measuring his head with a broken piece of leather. I didn't bother to ask why. I just laughed. So you know what he did? He threw the leather at me! That's just Jason for you.

But he could be serious, too. My first week working at the ranch, I ran into a lot of problems. Every once in a while I would just break down crying. I tried not to let anyone notice and for the most part, no one did. Except for Jason. I used to think he could read my mind. Somehow, he always knew just what was wrong, and just how to cheer me up. There was no way I could hate him. Why, he was like my brother!

Even so, I found myself feeling a bit jealous. Every time he'd ride by on Hawk, I'd turn away. And every time I saw him stroking "my horse," I'd feel this little prick of anger that I couldn't stop. I knew it wasn't Jason's fault. Still, my desire for Hawk blurred everything else.

It had been nearly a month since school had begun and my summer job at the horse ranch had ended. My mom, an old friend of many of the cowboys on the ranch, had called the manager up to talk about some horse he wanted to sell. They talked for a long time, and when she hung up, she had a sad look on her face, and I could tell it wasn't the horse she was thinking about. "Jason's got cancer, Lacy," she said.

The words didn't come like a blow to the chest, like the stories always say about bad news. They were more like a numbness that turned to an aching pain that wouldn't leave. At first I was in shock. I'd never really lost a loved one, not while I was old enough to know what was going on. The closest I'd come was when old Mrs. Elwell, who was like everybody's grandmother, passed away last year. But that was different. She was in her eighties, I think, with grandkids and even great-grandkids. Her case was nothing like Jason's. When the news really began to sink in, I couldn't stop the flow of questions tumbling around in my brain. Why Jason, why now? Why would God do this to a man in his twenties, with a wife and a little son? Why couldn't it have been someone else, anybody else?

For the next few days, all I could think about was the whys. Then I began to think about me. Before, when I thought of my job at the horse ranch, all I could think of was Hawk. I remembered guiltily those twinges of jealousy I'd had when I'd seen Jason riding "my horse." And I began to think. I was bombarded with more whys, but this time of a different nature: Why hadn't I been able to see past that little buckskin horse, to things so much more important? Why had I given in to that jealous bone that persisted inside me? Why hadn't I realized all the blessings I already had, instead of wishing for what I didn't possess?

I don't want this to be a sad story. Yes, Jason is still sick with cancer. I don't know what will happen, but I know God knows what he's doing. All I can do is pray, and leave it in His capable hands. But, by His grace, I won't have to learn the same lesson twice. I won't get my priorities in the wrong order again. Yes, I still love Hawk. I'd still love to own him. But he's nowhere near as important as my family and friends. If I was told right now that Hawk had been sold to Jason or any of the other ranch hands who love him, I know one thing for sure: I wouldn't give in to that jealous streak. And, to remind me of this, I've made that silly strip of leather that Jason threw at me into a bracelet, and I wear it around my wrist. This isn't a sad story; it's a story of hope. Next time, I'll take a good look at what's important to me-before it's too late.


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Poetry
2nd Place

No One Can Tell
by Chynna Sparacio, 13

I'm screaming but
No one can hear me
I'm crying but
No one can see me.
I'm sleeping
But I'm awake.
My thoughts confuse me
But no one can tell.
The emotions on my
Face have not been
Erased but are hidden
From the world.
My actions held
Back by my mind
But, no one can tell.
No one can tell
When I'm here or there.
I see people stare
So they know I'm here.
No one can tell
When I space out
Or when I'm aware
No one can tell
But I don't care.

 

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Short Story
2nd Place

Dear Diary: Mother's Nervous Breakdown (and other family secrets)
by Caeli Palmer, 13 and Christine Palmer, 14

 

Dear Diary,

Mother had another nervous breakdown today, but nobody noticed it. Except me. Only reason I noticed is that she has them all the time. Boring, but still slightly more interesting than those reality shows. Mother doesn't realize that she's having nervous breakdowns, but Diary - you and I know better.

Dear Diary,
Today I caught Mother wasting electricity, again. It bothers her when I tell her not to do that. It bothers me when she does these things. Mother never listens. All I did was turn off the light over her sewing while she was sewing. I told her to stop wasting electricity. She growled "Are you insane?" I told her the truth, "Yes, I am." I'm still grounded. But at least I have you, Diary.

Dear Diary,
My nickname is Bug, but I don't know why. Sometimes Mother says it's because I was buggy as a kid, whatever that means. Other times she says it's because the mosquitoes love to bite me. I tried to convince her I wanted a new nickname, but she refuses to call me Snowbird. I guess Bug it is for a little while longer. But you just wait, Diary, I will win!

Dear Diary,
Today the dentist picked at my teeth. Pick pick pick pick pick. I told Mother about how the dentist had the chair too high, and Mother just laughed and started making jokes about 'Bug and the Beanstalk.' Diary, it wasn't very funny.

Dear Diary,
Older sisters are not necessarily more educated, but they sure like to throw their fake knowledge around. I mean, really, Diary - does it actually matter if I call it a male chicken or a rooster? Can't they figure it out for themselves? And as far as I'm concerned, Diary - skirts with little triangles or pleated skirts- it's all the same thing, isn't it?! If they were really that educated, I don't think it would bother them. Well, anyway, you and I know better- don't we, Diary?

Dear Diary,
Mother had yet another nervous breakdown today. This is getting tiresome. We came back from the beach with our braids already dry after swimming in the ocean. We are supposed to undo them while they are still wet, otherwise the braids shrink. A lot. But it's not a big deal if they do…we just have to comb them out. I mean, isn't that what detangler is made for? But no, Mother had to have a breakdown because she had to comb out four and a half feet of hair on me, and four and a half feet of hair on my sister. I guess it bothered her that it took a total of four and a half hours. But I mean, really, Diary, what else does she have to do with her time? My head hurts. And I'm grounded. What would I do without you, Diary?

Dear Diary,
Mother stopped me in the middle of my question, demanding to know what and where "The Thing" was. Diary, I swear, I was floored. I had no idea what this woman was talking about. I figured another breakdown was on the way, but I played along. Seems she has an issue with my use of the phrase "See, here's the thing." Honestly, Diary, she actually started making a list of the "Things." Diary, here are some of them-she called it "The Thing List." Can you believe it, Diary? Some of the things she put on that list were:

  • The Coffee Thing (which if you ask me, Diary, sounds more like her thing.)
  • The Organizing Thing (she thinks I'm too organized. Like she would know.)
  • The Phone Thing (let's not even go there, Diary.)
  • The Diary Thing (I think she's on to us, Diary.)

Dear Diary,
I don't know why Mother gets so upset when I correct her. She was holding an item of clothing, and I tell you, Diary, the words that left her mouth were "What is this?" So I told her. "It's a skirt." As soon as those words left my mouth, Mother had another nervous breakdown. Diary, how was I to know she meant what kind of fabric it was?

Dear Diary,
Mother is yelling up the stairs, "What are you doing? Writing in that diary again?!" Diary, I told a lie. I said no, I was not. Diary, she's making me into a criminal, that I should have to lie about my time with you.

Dear Diary,
It's been twenty-five minutes since my last entry, but Diary - I couldn't wait any longer! Mother says I spend too much time in my room writing to you, Diary. She says it's bad for my mind and my social development. I told her I felt she had more to do with that than you, Diary. You guessed it, Diary. I'm grounded.

Dear Diary,
Today Mother had one of her many nervous breakdowns. She asked me how come all of my pants are torn. I told her the truth. My older sister went upstairs and ripped them all. Mother yelled, "What are you going to tell me, that she's Christine-the-Ripper?" Honestly, Diary, do I have to spell everything out for her? Needless to say, I'm grounded. Mother just doesn't realize that she's having all these nervous breakdowns. But Diary - you and I know better.

Dear Diary,
Mother asked me if I would like to spend the rest of my life in Stupidland. I told her only if she would always be my mother. Your advice worked wonderfully, Diary. You always know best.

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Poetry
3rd Place


The Answer

by Lee Richard Elick Rabun, 13

Why does the world spin 'round?
Why do people cry?
These are questions I would ask
when I was a little guy.

Why do people hurt each other?
Why do people hate?
These are questions I would ask
when I was maybe eight.

Being older I still ponder
the issues of today.
In deepened thought I often wonder
exactly what to say.

How does the world survive?
This question is now answered.
Love makes the world go 'round.
That must be the answer.


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Short Story
3rd Place

Loud Life, Silent Death
by Christina Slavoff, 17


A wealthy elderly woman walked through a rundown neighborhood. The party was the best the old woman had ever thrown. The only thing that was missing was all of her friends, long gone. The dim, metal street lights illuminated the small amethyst sequins on her long, lavender gown. Her tiny black purse held only the necessary items, but no money. She didn't need money to host a prepaid party. Her loose, light brown hair was held back in the same relaxed bun she wore when she was a child. Her medium beige skin was lined with age and pain. She had just finished celebrating her 65th birthday and what would have been her 22nd anniversary had her husband not died of cancer four years ago.

The streets were dirtier than usual. The lights were dimmed by hundreds of insects swarming over them. Two of the street lights were knocked out by bricks children had thrown at them. Glass lay in the street, menacingly waiting for an unprotected limb to pierce. Garbage lay quietly on stoops and sidewalks, smelling horribly.

A small dirty man smoked an old wooden pipe in the opening to a grimy, narrow alley. He wondered if he could make his tiresome plan succeed as he watched the rich woman stroll down the road. Only the slim man was uncertain and enthusiastic to begin. He sauntered slowly down the darkened street towards the helpless old woman. She never screamed. She didn't have a chance to. The slender blade took her life without a word. The man eagerly raided the corpse's purse in search of the only thing that he desired: money. When the realization that the woman was broke hit him, he panicked. Damn, I just killed a woman for nothing and I still don't know where to hide the body. What am I going to do? I'm doomed. His mind raced, forsaking all sane thoughts. Shaking with a combination of feeling terror and slick, cold blood drying all over him, he carefully lifted the frail corpse. His wife had always told him he was dumb, but this was the first time he might actually agree.

He found an abandoned warehouse in which to place the remains of what was once a radiant woman with a steadfast, loving heart. She was scared when she passed away, but now so was he. His watch ticked on as he sat by the newly departed, unsure of what to do next. The insignia above the broad doorway stated that they were in Dark Throne Industries. He'd never heard of the place before. Dust fell off the shaky rope catwalk above him, below rusted metal. Hours went by as the man sat staring; silently mourning the empty body he had created.

Warmth and light as if the sun blazed inches from his horrific face appeared as a warning. As it dimmed, the ghostly figure of the old woman formed in the air holding a small flaming candle. She smiled delicately, melting his fears as if they had never existed. Her lovely form moved closer to him every second as did the flame. Bending easily, she picked up the knife that took her life and touched the tip to the flame. The knife was no more. Then she touched the beautiful flame to her body and it disappeared. She looked into her murderer's eyes, mouthed "thank you" and touched the flame to her soul. She was no more. The dirty man returned to his house half an hour later and flicked on his lights. On his coffee table, sitting as though it were ordinary, was a billion dollars and the promise of a new and better life.

 

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